Bravo
You’ve won
So many have but one
Desire
It’s to succeed
So many are clueless
What it means
I’m telling you now
It seems to me
That beauty is not
Only in the eye
Of the beholder
It also lies in the
Hearts content
Truly streaming through
Emotions
And the succession
Of pride along with will
Takes us to the next tide
In the ocean
Learning of what makes us a winner
Surely you can see
Is all up to beings
Of aptitude
Testing one’s will
Along with reaching
Beyond what we see
Allows us the dignity to face
Our actions
And withstand pain
To the end.
Until won in body and soul.
Are you a winner?
johncoyote
I like the question at the ending of the poem. I know from experience. Karma is a fair judge. You will pay sooner or later for bad actions. Thank you for the excellent poetry.